take a look at the soviet symbol again...
the sickle looks messed up, the hammer's shaft is kinda bent...
and where's the red star? XD But the flags cool
take a look at the soviet symbol again...
the sickle looks messed up, the hammer's shaft is kinda bent...
and where's the red star? XD But the flags cool
I didnt want to add the star. Your right the Shaft is kind of bent upwards towards the hammer. but only slightly. The sickle is curved in. thats why it looks " messed up" its the inside of the hook. But ehhh you know...what ever. thanks for the review
dude, seriously...
read the first post of this thread for rules:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1072217/1
no quick-sketches/ under-10-minutes-artworks belong into the art portal
Yes I know that's why I marked it for being a sketche, not asking for beeing in the artportal.
hehe ^^
not bad. in fact i like the idea! but he kinda looks like a... uhm... beetle?
not bad, eh
but jin's left shoulder looks kinda weird (his left), christies arm looks like it has been attached the body where the ring is (cause it is a lil' bit lower there) and the faces are missing
he's wearing a hood and that ring is supposed to be on tight so the part of the arm on the left is her muscles
NICE!
anatomy is correct, weapons aren't messed up, coloring's great (it's kinda hard to make a good camo style), lighting is nice... you just passed everything to get a 10/10 from me ^^ (plus 3 points for the awesome chick XD)
cool!
omg!
It looks like it just passed an HORRIBLE accident. Cars kinda have proportions, too!
here some tipps:
1.) the rims shouldn't be that huge that the rubber of the wheels is only a few milimeters thin
2.) the body should be "clean", which means no waves, no bends, only straight clean lines
3.)the front wheels are way to far at the front and the rear wheels are way too far at the end, which means that you would almost comüpletely leave out the front/rear bumper
4.) why the hell is the bottom beveled that much? usually it's a almost parallel line to the ground or only slightly beveled
5.) how are you gonna' see onto the street with that hood in the middle of your sight and covering about 80% of your front window?
6.) what's that spike on the front bumper? wanna' kill cows?
Hope these tipps helped a bit! and please (!), don't take them as a insult or something like that. I just wanna help ya' :)
humph
I like your style, but... you should really improve your human anatomy skills/ knowledge/ whatever
Uhm...
I hope that you do know that the art portal won't accept Photography. If you don't believe me, read the rules!
Yes,i read the rulz,and u can fotograph,but only art photography!!!
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