Nice and simple design!
the armor's nice and simple design definitely gets a plus point :3
but here comes the critique ^^''
the knee protector of his/her left leg (his/her perspective) looks weird (a bit too high and too small) and his/her left foot also seems to be a tad too thin at its tip. The hands should be drawn with more detail rather than with simple sticks, but that's quite difficult to master at the beginning :3
weapon designs are alright, typically for artists who don't often draw detailed weaponry (mostly rectangular shapes and lack of detail) but that's not so important ^^
yeah, I agree with all you've said. I do usually try to draw the entire finger and any details, but just couldn't get it right in the pencil sketch, so just decided to go with that. I'll try to work on that in later pieces. and yeah, the protector is a bit small. I'm suprised that I didn't catch that! And I like to keep armor simple, as my drawings are posted life-sized, too much detail and it gets hard to figure out what's what.
As MrDonkeydong155 already said, there are quite a lot of NG users who will flame at you for your white BGs... but it's nothing of matter.
I like the arms of your machine! Keep up the nice work, eh!
Yeah, the arms are my favorite part, and I like to combine form and function. I needed something that would be unrelenting and sturdy, hence the end metal parts, but able to be manipulated into strange and wierd positions ("The better to eviscerate you, my dear!"), as it does like tourture. and taking over the worlde and the rest of the Sol system.
That's some decent artwork, eh :3
I like the hairstyle, you don't see similar ones that often. the bloody eye somehow makes him look creepier.
But the neck kinda seems crooked (the line on the left of the viewer's perspective is a bit odd) and the legs are a bit too thin for his pretty masculine body. And I guess you don't like to draw hands, eh? :D I know they're complicated to draw at the beginning, but the more you practise, the better they'll become (you could start by drawing your own hands in different positions and from different perspectives).
The only reason his hands are behind his back is because he probably has something leathal hidden behind his back. but yeah, hands arn't my favorite. I'm fine with gloves and armored hands, just not normal hands. and yes, the legs are a bit off, but meh....and thanks for the drawing advice, too.
Textures are really good, but grip, magazine and stock look a bit weird (especially the mag), too less detail on the mag and the stock. trigger is too blocky... well, the whole gun seems to be a bit blocky...
but apart from these it's really nicely done! ^^
You're improving! ^^
I like watching your works improve and I really like your style.
nice details in the mechanic joints!
uh... is aegis an OC of yours?
Son, just give me the real review in a PM or something.
I still say that this one can be considered as one of your best artworks I've ever seen! ^^
btw: it could take some time till I finish the remastered version... sry -.-' I'm really overstressed this month
It's all right. I can wait.
Hell, I forgot until you mentioned it here.
Pomelo invasion! :D
I wouldn't have expected you to submit this to the art portal, but still this is ossim :3
I really am sad that it's slowly dying.
She's got some weapons of the finest! (especially the arctic warfare one... a.k.a. L96A1. It's one of my own favourites, too :3)
Only thing that disturbs me are the fingers... otherwise it's really nice! ^^
Dammit, those fingers are the best attempt at drawing a hand I've ever done.
Oh well, thanks.
If you compare the original Fauna artwork with yours, yours would be definitely the better one! :3 I really like that facial expression of hers!
She kinda' looks like if she was charging up an attack or something :3
Haha, thanks! Good to know you took the time to check the reference piece.
This one is so awesome! (awesomeness level over 9000!!!)
You just made my day XD
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